What do you think of this verse?
You don’t have to rate it, just let me know what you think.
One of my contacts sent me an email. She said she was feeling down & she new I could cheer her up & she wanted me to write her something, so I wrote her this.
“You caught my attention with the beauty of your words
I read your profile & I can tell that you were a special kind of girl
We share the same goal, we both want to be recognized in this world
I want to move the crowd with the rhythm of my flows
And you want to be a Diva that steals the show everywhere you go
Maybe one day we will make our dreams come true
If we work hard at it & pay our dues
But enough about that, I wanna talk about you
And how you make me feel
The way you carry yourself with class is so surreal
You have respect for yourself & others around you, which is why you appeal to me with the things you say
I would like to get to know you, if that’s okay
You seem like a nice girl who isn’t afraid
To show the world that she has a heart
I find that beautiful, just like abstract art
So I write you this poem to cheer you up
Because I know how this world can be Rough & Tough
Sometimes it can be too much & that’s enough
To break anybody’s spirits
Which is why you asked me to write these Lyrics
And I hope I put a smile on your face when you read it. ”
@ the Prizefighter Inferno
It’s not supposed to have a rhythm, you dimwit. It’s just something I wrote. I don’t want to rap it out to an instrumental.


